TASCHLIKH
By
the wizened roots of a massive oak
under
the juniper tree
I
cast my sins into the creek
scraping
the lint from my pocket,
a
mass of gritty regrets
tangled
together, lodging under my nails.
I
sat on the muddy bank
not
caring about my skirt.
Blue
gentians twisted in the oak roots,
clover
bent under my boots.
One
bit of foil was clumped in with my sins.
The
lint swished downstream,
but
the tiny glint of foil,
flashing
in the sun, hooked
on
a mass of gingko leaves too great
to
be moved by mere water.
Some
sins are too beautiful
to
ever let go.
from Nine Kinds of Wrong, JKPublishing
I liked this. What struck me were cast sins and scraping of lint, a mass of gritty regrets tangled together. You did not care about your skirt, blue gentians, not blue balls, twisted in the oak. Clover bent under your boots. These are clear words. And then another mention of your sins and foil, and the lint returns to my mind, this time swishing. Hooked on gingko, and this acceptance and celebration of sins, which for writers is like yarn to make sweaters that keep us warm.
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